The chart below shows the readership of the Mainstream and the other newspapers in the country of Totalitariana from 1985 to the end of 2009
The three-line graph illustrates the changes in the figure of people reading the different newspapers namely Sportsman, Mainstream and Youngster in Totalitarlana throughout a twenty four - year period commencing from 1985. Overall, the readership of the Sportsman and the Mainstream saw opposite trends while there were some fluctuations in that of the Youngster.
As can be clearly seen from the chart, at the beginning of the period, the rate of the Mainstream readership started at the highest level (1,200,000) then decreased sharply to 300,000 users in over a decade, at which point, it continued to fall but more steeply to become the least popular newspapers at the end of the period.
In contrast, with only 6,000 readers intially, there was a twenty-fold growth in the amount of people reading Sportsman. Afterwards, it surpassed that of the others and reached a peak of 1,800,000 readers, also was by far the most favorable means of achieving information.
On the other hand, despite wild fluctuations, a slight rose of 40 thousand readers from 1985 to 2009 in the use of the Youngster readership throughout the period.
In conclusion, there were changing patterns in the popularity of the Sportsman and the Mainstream from being the most popular to the least and vice versa.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17703349282 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93752020305 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8690989609 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229563240607 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946211018149 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612674355004 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116692740052 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605948846761 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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