The chart below shows the results of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian countries.
The chart illustrates the studies held over residents coffee and tea buy and consumption habits in five Australian countries(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart).
Overall, the residents of Sydney bought more fresh coffee during last 4 weeks. City of Hobart has more demand for instant coffee by residents during last 4 weeks. Melbourne and Hobart shows around same percentage of city residents choose cafe's for tea and coffee during last 4 weeks.
Fresh coffee bought by the citizens of Sydney around 44% higher than all other cities in Australia. Subsequent decrease of percentage in cities of Melbourne around 43%, Brisbane-around 33% and remain constant in Adelaide-around 33%. Meanwhile, Hobart has slight increase of around 37% than Adelaide and Brisbane.
Instant coffee purchased by the citizens of different cities are fluctuating. Cities of Sydney around 45%, Melbourne around 47%, Brisbane-around 53% shows subsequently increase. While, Adelaide around 50% sudden decrease and in Hobart it shows 54% immediate growth during last 4 weeks.
Residents of all cities prefer cafe's more for consuming coffee and tea. The percentage of citizen choose the same fluctuate between cities. City of Sydney has around 61%, Melbourne around 63% growth, and subsequent fall in cities of Brisbane and Adelaide around 55% and 49%. Thereafter, immediate rise around 63% in Hobart during last 4 weeks.
- The chart below shows the results of survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian countries 61
- Task 1 The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
- The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 67
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree 56
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...chart illustrates the studies held over residents coffee and tea buy and consumption habi...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50925925926 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86569212548 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5317193705 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107484381892 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509194546479 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698466463773 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932114877135 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928500389634 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.