The Chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The Chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples’ coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The given bar chart represents the data gathered after a survey conducted in five cities of Australia to know people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits.

Overall, majority of people living in the five Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide, Brisbane and Hobart) prefer to have coffee or tea in a cafe while least amount of people living in mentioned cities have bought fresh coffee in last one month.

Now turning to the details, according to the survey, drinking coffee or tea at Café is more trending among the people of all five cities. Almost sixty percent of Melbourians and Hobartians like to have coffee or tea at Café while nearly 60 percent in Sydney, 55 percent in Brisbane and around 50 percent of people in Adelaide visited cafes in last month for consumption of drinkables like tea and coffee.

As illustrated in the bar graph, buying instant coffee is the second most preferred way in the surveyed cities. In Hobart around 55 percent people bought instant coffee. The consumption rate of instant coffee is almost more than 40 percent in each city. However, the percentage of people buying fresh coffee in the last four weeks is least across every mentioned city. Especially in Brisbane and Adelaide less than 35 percent people bought fresh coffee in the last four weeks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the least'.
Suggestion: while the least
... prefer to have coffee or tea in a cafe while least amount of people living in mentioned ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41190230467 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472727272727 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0910791641 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.111111111 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319038854332 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146300603657 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10239053799 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229749978883 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842684564687 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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