The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

The pie chart compares proportions of quests to different categories of tourist sites and to five theme parks in Britain in 1999.

Overall, the vast majority of people went either theme parks or museums/galleries, while wildlife parks/zoos saw the least visitors. Also, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was by far the most popular of the theme parks.

If we look at the theme parks and museums/galleries, when combined the hosted three quarters of all guests, with the former having 38% while the latter got 37%. On the other hand, historic houses/monuments (16%) and wildlife parks/zoos (9%) when put together where nowhere near as popular, with only a quarter of total visits.

Turning to the parks with themes, whereas nearly half of the tourists here preferred Blackpool Pleasure Beach at 47%, Aton Towers and Pleasureland did not attract anywhere near as many visitors, with figures of 17% and 16% respectively. Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland were the least popular with each having a tenth of all visits in this category.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18452380952 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9629168287 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9021612134 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0784174129736 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393435377817 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531883441555 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609959882017 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617554821995 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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