The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart compares the proportion of visitors patronising four different tourist attractions in Britain in 1999.
Overall, theme parks and museums or galleries were among the most popular destinations in 1999. In addition, tourists favored attending Blackpool Pleasure Beach over other actual attractions at theme parks.
It is clear that 38% of surveyed visitors went to the theme parks, which accounted for the highest percentage of the attendance, and tourists visiting the museums or galleries also made up 37%. Even though just only 16% of participants paid attention to the historic houses or monuments, this figure nearly doubled the wildlife parks or zoos’ proportion.
According to the investigation, at theme parks, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most viewed destination, with 47% of attendees participating in this game, while the statistics for the remaining types of attractions were well under 20%. To be precise, Alton Towers and Pleasureland, Southport attracted 17% and 16% of visitors respectively, but each only 10% of tourists spent time at the Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n of visitors patronising four different tourist attractions in Britain in 1999. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56069364162 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02900101324 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0840110541 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181214995755 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871990993646 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875539098161 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128972310296 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093831957107 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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