The pie chart provides information regarding a university’s Anthropology students pursuing activities after their graduation, and also the table provides information about their incomes after 5 years of experience.
First of all, the vast majority of graduates do a full-time job, and as the pie chart shows it is 52%. Furthermore, part-time work has the second place at only 15% after full-time work with a noticeable difference, followed by unemployed people at 12%. It is worth noting that the differences between unknown activities after graduation and also students who do full-time postgraduate study are comparable, and a tiny minority (5%) of postgraduate students do a part-time job.
Turning to the table, salaries between $25000-$74999 are mainly paid by private companies (45%) in contrast with government sectors and freelance consultants that are totally a mere 20% for both of them. However, high salaries ($75000-$100000+) are for freelance consultants and government sectors ( 80% for both) broadly.
To conclude, it is obvious that the overwhelming majority of graduates undertake full-time work, and the highest incomes are for people who work for the government and do freelance consultants.
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 73
- In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 88
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lance consultants and government sectors 80% for both broadly. To conclude, it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overnment and do freelance consultants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5652173913 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16569439191 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7312468535 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190614579902 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867761840382 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699000364624 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112415854008 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803388504889 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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