The two given charts illustrate the information on the jobs of postgraduate anthropologists and their salaries after five years working.
It is clear that the majority of Anthropology graduates did full-time work, whereas the number of them did part-time work and postgrad study accounted for a small amount. It is also noticeable that most of five-year experience Anthropologists earned over $100000.
Regarding their work, over a half of them did full-time work after graduating. By contrast, the proportion of part-time anthropologists took up only 15%. The figure for unemployed anthropology graduates ranked third with 12%. Meanwhile, the percentage of anthropologists did part time job and postgrad study was only 8%.
Turning to their salaries, 40% of freelance consultants earned $75000 to $99999 and the proportion of people earn over $100000 was the same after working for 5 years. It is noticeable that the salary that government sector paid for anthropologists were rather high, half of them earn over $100000. Meanwhile, $50000 to $74999 is the salary paid for 35% of five-year working anthropologists, ranked highest among other salary levels.
- The picture below shows the Use of renewable energy accounting for the total energy from 1971 to 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant 84
- The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting t 78
- IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
- Sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas 1999 2004
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., the percentage of anthropologists did part time job and postgrad study was only 8%. Tu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41899441341 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21650925304 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4976810815 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245177249005 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106743353295 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069722512621 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178642441895 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587182648905 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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