The chart given below shows the expenditure involving in publishing a magazine Summarize the information

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The chart given below shows the expenditure involving in publishing a magazine. Summarize the information.

The pie chart provides information regarding the percentage of costs in magazine distributions. Overall, there are six major sectors, editorial content, promotion, binding, paper, printing and transportation costs, involved in the production of magazines. editorial content development is the highest expenditure, followed by transportation costs as the least.

According to the chart, editorial content development accounted for one-third percent of the total percentage has the greatest expenditure cost in the production. In addition, printing and promotion costs are the second and third uppermost fields financed on, for almost a quarter and 18 percent of the data respectively.

In contrast, binding, paper and transportation costs are the least money expended on. Moreover, magazine producers spend around 10 percent for paper costs and 12 percent for binding which are the second and third cheapest category invested in. Lastly, cash paid for transportations are only about six percent resulting in the lowest possible expenditure for publishers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, third, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9477124183 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20730615382 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2611033341 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094848633961 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491879389756 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600256170436 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695464290924 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321376656746 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 11.4140731707 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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