The chart gives information about Southland s main export in 2000 20 and future projections for 2025 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This table shows Southland’s international tourism, dairy, and meat export prospects for the period 2000 to 2025.

The economy of Southland’s international tourism industry was 8 million in 2000 and then began to rise slowly. Between 2000 and 2025, it averaged $ 9 million and continued to rise again. In 2025, that figure could reach about $ 10 million.

Southland’s dairy economy was 7 million in 200 years. Between 2000 and 2023, this figure continued to rise. Between 2000 and 2025, Southland’s dairy economy may have averaged about $ 9.5 million by 2025, when it reached an average of 10 million and then began to decline slowly.

The meat economy of Southan State in 2000 was 6 million. Between 2000 and 2025, it was about 5.5 million. By 2025, it is likely to fall to 5 million.

The best economy in the state of Southland is the international tourism sector, followed by the dairy economy and the meat industry in the last place. These economies are the most used economies of the Southand state.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
...wly. Between 2000 and 2025, it averaged $ 9 million and continued to rise again. In...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
... In 2025, that figure could reach about $ 10 million. Southland’s dairy economy w...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
...s dairy economy may have averaged about $ 9.5 million by 2025, when it reached an a...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71644604927 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46783625731 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6602495058 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128687224461 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669119767973 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437319100143 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945987999535 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432539056717 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
...wly. Between 2000 and 2025, it averaged $ 9 million and continued to rise again. In...
^^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
... In 2025, that figure could reach about $ 10 million. Southland’s dairy economy w...
^^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
...s dairy economy may have averaged about $ 9.5 million by 2025, when it reached an a...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71644604927 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46783625731 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6602495058 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128687224461 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669119767973 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437319100143 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945987999535 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432539056717 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.