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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
... has spotted a mistake in your writing. you'll'>you'll sea one if you mis...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: See
...os;ll sea one if you mispell something. see what we did there? you'll'>...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
...spell something. see what we did there? you'll'>you'll also see an und...
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Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... typos or grammatical errors that could effect your credibility, grammarly will helps ...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...effect your credibility, grammarly will helps you fix those to. Click any of grammarl...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Underlines
...mmar. Sorry, couldn't resist. underlines that are blue indicate that grammarly h...
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Line 10, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Grammarly
...a sentence that is unnecessarily wordy. grammarly scores each text based on how clear it ...
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Line 10, column 230, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effortless manner" with adverb for "effortless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uidance in order to do a revision of it in an effortless manner. Afterall, there are some sentences tha...
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Line 10, column 255, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...revision of it in an effortless manner. Afterall, there are some sentences that are gram...
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Line 10, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t but still awkward and hard to follow. it goes without saying that sometimes you ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ds that are basically unnecessary. if you want even more feedback on your wri...
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Line 13, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
...r writing, check out grammarly Premium. you'll'>you'll be able to catc...
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Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
...nts and classical word-choice mistakes. you'll'>you'll see suggestions...
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Line 13, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
...d more confident, polite, and engaging. you'll'>you'll even get vocabu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91701244813 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.78325520029 2.65546596893 180% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663900414938 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1093111522 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8823529412 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00513227757901 0.215688989381 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00218685323822 0.103423049105 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0087474129529 0.0843802449381 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00422167973648 0.15604864568 3% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00844335947295 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.46 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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