The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019
The given column chart illustrates the amount of time that 4 groups of tourists spent on 3 leisure activities, which are visiting the beach, reading books and visiting places, in Greece in August 2019.
It is noticeable from the chart that the least amount of time is spent on visiting places in all groups. Chinese people spent a surprised amount of 8 hours on reading books, which is the highest compared to other tourists. The amount of time spent on reading books was almost similar among the remaining groups. They spent around 4-5 hours a day on this sector. Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent more time at the beach than reading books, but the vice versa works for the remaining groups. Turkish people spent 5 and 4 hours whereas Brazilian spent 6 and 4 hours on visiting the beach and reading books respectively. The Americans, shows the lowest difference of time spent on each sector with 3,4 and 5 hours on visting places, at the beach and reading books consecutively whereas the Chinese tourists shows the highest discrepancy of 7 hours between reading boosk and visiting places.
Overall, it is observed that Chinese people spend the most time on reading books whereas Brazilian tourists spend the most at the beach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... time that 4 groups of tourists spent on 3 leisure activities, which are visiting...
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Suggestion:
... difference of time spent on each sector with 3,4 and 5 hours on visting places, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45184460154 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1969094677 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253174256988 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124026364159 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541116344242 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166332740105 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629060986414 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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