The bar graph illustrates the destinations selected by UK citizens between 2004 and 2007 to travel.
Overall, there are five countries i.e. Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, and France. The favourite destination among Britishers in all four years is Australia, whilst the other countries remained on fluctuation ratio. In the year 2004, Australia has chosen by 41000 people, Spain stayed up at 34000, New Zealand, USA, and France had a similar proportion of 22000 people.
In the next year, Australia and the USA faced a slight decreased in their share of 2% and 4% respectively. On the contrary, France had drastically changed and chose by 33000 people. Other two countries Spain and New Zealand had minor shifts in their apportion. In the year 2005, Australia becomes the highest visiting place approached by the British citizens as it raised from 39000 to 52000 travellers. The USA had the same position as in the year 2004 while France witnessed the downfall in their partake. In this addition, New Zealand and Spain confronted again decreasing situation.
Lastly, In the year 2007, all the countries had a downfall in their visitor's ploughshare, Australia had 9% of drop, Spain goes on 27000, France went to 19000, New Zealand and the USA was stumbled at 20000 tourists. This elucidates British residents start saving money rather spend on vacations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15765765766 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72179815788 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.907096974 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825198604857 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038183863057 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671760487649 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888716322183 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094390584248 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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