At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disvantages?
In some countries, the population has increased relatively with a large proportion of young adults comparatively than older people. The contribution towards the country's economy and GDP includes the necessary involvement of their citizens for rapid growth and development. This is very crucial for any country to have a sustainable amount of people with the average age to get maximum output for the economy. I believe that the benefits of having an increasing number of adults outweigh the drawbacks.
The disadvantage of possessing young adults in higher ratio delivers a lower rate of experience in the workforce between the level of ability. They have a lack of guidance and support over the work because of having a lack of experienced senior authorities. It takes so much time and a lot of effort to train and sustain young adults in their fields.
Despite this, there are some advantages of holding youth generation by a nation. First, the young workforce has excellent capabilities and capacity to acquire a range of skills and knowledge. These benefits the entire country by developing new technologies and advancements with ease of access. Secondly, The adults are quick and adaptable to adjust in a drastic environment. In addition, it is a competitive advantage over other countries to compete in the diversified world. Moreover, many youths have different visions and mindset today for surviving in challenging situations which makes it more worthwhile. However, it is an asset for any country to have an extensive rate of young minds.
I would, therefore, argue that there are some disadvantages of sustaining a young generation, they are outweighed by the advantages. By giving them the necessary amount of workshops and education will enhance their experience of doing work with the effectiveness and efficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29452054795 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05948255056 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1675284612 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262607071402 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745198826172 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732592668154 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140027447594 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815940528896 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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