Nowdays, the percentage of young adults who populate certain cities is higher than the number of elderly people. This change in the population could create several disadvantages but I think the advantages would be more.
First of all, older people are the backbone of society, this means that those people are the guardians of the tradition and the executor of the rules. They have huge knowledge from which they can draw to have an enormous help when it is time to make a decision. This can prevent mistakes that have already been made in the past. However, elderly people have more difficulty to learn new things and this can be a problem when it is time to improve ideas and technologies. Another negative thing is that due to the inability to easily learn new things, those people can become too attached to the past by not allowing the juniors to have a part in the decisions.
On the other hand, young adults can be the right basis for the future. Even if they don't have a huge experience in their past, those people have fresh brains, ready to assimilate notion, learn from new topics and improve every day their knowledge. Youngs adult can provide new ideas, creating new opportunities and jobs.
In conclusion, young adults need to have more space inside the country decision, having a representation inside the rooms of the government. Moreover, older should help more the younger to learn the past and the rules, giving like this a solid contribution for the people that one day will become the leaders.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79467680608 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47376905085 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5401036012 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117261010023 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051398198786 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047119814008 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907971817813 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740303734301 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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