The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000

Essay topics:

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The information about the Gross domestic product from IT industry and service industrynof the UK between 1992 and 2000 is depicted by the showed bar graph. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
Overall, it can be seen from the graph both IT industry and service sector experinced a upward trend and had some fluctuations. However, in the end of the peiod GDP of IT sector was higher as compared to the service industry.
To begin with, in 1992, the IT sector GDP was around 6.2%, then next two years, it was increased by approximately 2%. However, there was a slight decreased observed in the percentage of IT GDP in the UK, it accounted for approximately 8% in 19996. In addition to, a dramatic increase was seen in the rate of IT GDP in 1998, it comprised to 12%. Moreover, there had been a significant increase observed in the proportion of GDP of IT in the UK, it accounted for around 15%.
Moving further, the economy of service industry was 4% in 1992, then it increased slightly in 1994 by around 1.5%. In 1966, in the UK GDP of this sector had the highest as compared to other sector, it was about 7%. Neverthless, the service industry stayed nearly the same in last four years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... industry and service sector experinced a upward trend and had some fluctuations....
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...f the peiod GDP of IT sector was higher as compared to the service industry. To b...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the service industry. To begin with, in 1992, the IT sector GDP was around 6....
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ice industry. To begin with, in 1992, the IT sector GDP was around 6.2%, then next t...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entage of IT GDP in the UK, it accounted for approximately 8% in 19996. In additi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56744186047 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70005508427 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497674418605 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.829794047 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224810845938 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846249055676 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734636400844 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142310861579 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690830211792 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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