The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

A glance at the chart provided reveals some striking information about the frequency of eating at the fast food restaurants among the american population over a period of 10 years. It is evident from the information provided that overall most of the people ate fast food either once in a week or once or twice in a month.
One fascinating fact highlighted by the chart is the fact that only 3% to 5% of the american population ate junk food everyday over a course of 10 years. The consumption of fast food peaks in the year 2006 where 32% of the people consumed fast food once in a week. A similar trend can be seen for the year 2013 where 32% of the population ingested fast food once or twice in a month.
Also noteworthy is the point that only 4 to 5 percent of the population never consumed any fast food in this decade. The least disparity is among the people who ate fast food few times in a year, it almost remained constant from 12% to 15% in this time frame.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30054644809 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4414307429 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8972861773 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26934037621 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132276171295 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351727615524 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188380822389 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027887131726 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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