The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The given chart illustrates the proportion of people of two genders in an Asian nation passing their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the percentage of people who passed the driving test in both men and women saw an upward trend over the period shown. Furthermore, the percentage of women who passed the driving test was higher than that of men in all years. In 1980, the percentage of people who passed the driving test was the lowest in both genders, with 49% of women and 29% of men. From 1980 to 1990, there was a slight increase in the percentage of women who passed the driving test by 2%. On the other hand, this percentage of man had a substantial rise by 9% to 38%. There was a dramatic climb between 1990 and 2000 in the percentage of women passing the driving test from 51% to 69%. However, this percentage had a slight fall for the first time in 30 years by 6%. For men, this percentage from 2000 to 2010 had no change, at 49% and be the highest figure of men in the period shown. In conclusion, the percentage of people passing the driving test increased every year and will continue to be higher in the next few years.
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| 2023-09-27 | Tran Hoang Bao | 100 | view |
| 2023-09-07 | ta minh anh | view | |
| 2023-09-07 | ta minh anh | view | |
| 2023-09-07 | ta minh anh | view | |
| 2023-08-26 | maidiem1508 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33936651584 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30634331967 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457013574661 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4417675302 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302173174216 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150324158219 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788373464932 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302173174216 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.