The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph illustrated the movies screened in 2001 at UK and Australian theaters. And also the line graph despite the numbers of cinema admission science 1987 to 2006.
Overall, the American films take the maturity of the movie market in UK and Australian, where 75 % of UK and 65 % of Australian industries has been occupied. Moreover, movies from UK have only 20% at local market where as the Australian cinema has only 6% at total. Likewise, other cinemas take the 18% Australian theater and only 5 % at UK.
On the other hand, UK had 100 millions of admission numbers in cinema. However these numbers has straightly down till 1985 where only 58 millions of student took the admission. As a same time the numbers of Admission at Australians, quite steadily at the end of 1993. After that it was gradually rose and reached at 80 million at the end of 2005. Meanwhile, the numbers of UK cinema admission has upward trend and hit the Plato at 160 million till 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...s from UK have only 20% at local market where as the Australian cinema has only 6% at to...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 million'.
Suggestion: 100 million
... 5 % at UK. On the other hand, UK had 100 millions of admission numbers in cinema. However th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...illions of admission numbers in cinema. However these numbers has straightly down till ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '58 million'.
Suggestion: 58 million
...as straightly down till 1985 where only 58 millions of student took the admission. As a same t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...nd of 1993. After that it was gradually rose and reached at 80 million at the end of...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...mbers of UK cinema admission has upward trend and hit the Plato at 160 million till 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68235294118 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58551495204 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2324163054 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243179974855 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118203067859 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734148335237 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185411494009 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565254614819 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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