The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Water use , selected countries in 2000?
The given pie chart reveals the information about the use of water in the world during the year 2000, by three different categories. and horizontal chart ilastrates information about the use of water in different four countries, the data is calibrated in percentum. Which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that during the year 2000, 70% water used in agriculture process in the all world, and that was highest use of water. However, second place of industries process with 22 % of use of water. Apart from all this, lowest 8% use of water in the domestic process
As far as friend was observed that during the year 2000, used of water in for selected country. In India highest use of water in agriculture process with 92% water, and India minimum use of water in two other process as compared to other countries, Moreover in Canada was 80% use of water in industries process, After that in New Zealand highest use of water in domestic process 46% water, furthermore in china water used in agriculture, domestic and industrial process Was been 69%, 9% and 22% water respectively.
Overall, it is evident That India Was highest use of water in agriculture process as compared to other countries, and Canada used highest water in industries process as compared to other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89592760181 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71147225904 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425339366516 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.418573813 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.25 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433299770908 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241796393162 0.103423049105 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960158385065 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312570817788 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086196886757 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.