The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The given pie charts depict, the teenagers and adults age population projection in Italy and Yemen between 2000 and will be predicted 2050.

According to the chart, age 60+ years were the most popular age from Yemen in 2000 while between 15-59 ages in Italy . On the other hand, between 15-59 years 0-14 years were approximately same ratio in 2000 whereas in 2050 year will be most famous age between 15-59 years. Although, 60+ year both population shown significantly same ratio in Yemen. It was indicated a tiny portion. Particularly, a large proportion famous enough age limit between 15-59 years from Italy in 2000 will be forecasted in 2050 same age ratio. Obviously, between 0-14 years and 60+ years were roughly same in 2000. Conversely, 60+ years population it was over a quarter and 0-14 years were under a quarter. In 2050 year will be predicted 60+ years just under a half. Overall, in Yemen country famous age limit illustrated different ages while Italy shown same age population. Especially, in Yemen tiny fraction significant similarly while Italy indicated differently in age population projection.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n 2000 while between 15-59 ages in Italy . On the other hand, between 15-59 years ...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be most famous age between 15-59 years. Although, 60+ year both population shown signifi...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ratio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ratios'.
Suggestion: ratios
...000 will be forecasted in 2050 same age ratio. Obviously, between 0-14 years and 60+ ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, similarly, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10382513661 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66973427449 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2719298158 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282544323351 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140567104884 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114598637256 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312249860632 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828881038002 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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