The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts provide data on how old the populations are in two countries of Yemen and Italy in
2000 and make predictions about different age groups in these two countries in 2050. At first
glance, the population of individuals aged between 15 to 59 is predicted to increase in Yemen,
while this age group is expected to decrease in Italy in 2050.
In 2000 the category of 0-14-year-old individuals constituted for half the whole population in
Yemen with 50.1%, which will be predicted to decrease to 37% in 2050, when the figure for
those who will be between 15 to 59 years old will be 57.3% with an increase of 11% compared to
2000. The proportion of aged people with the age of 60 and above will be expected to remain
almost unchanged from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% in 2050.
The majority of the population with 61.6% in Italy were 15 to 59 years old in 2000, whereas this
proportion will be predicted to account for 46.2% of the total population in 2050, whereas the
figure for those who will be in the category of 60 and above will see a rise of 18.2% from 2000
with 24.1% to 42.3% in 2050. Finally, the proportion of those who will be up to 14 years old will
Only witness a slight change between 2000 (14.3%) and 2050 (11.5%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73799126638 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45282719409 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445414847162 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3292024759 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.833333333 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287862856066 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176871784736 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625524349589 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12729064549 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542405075487 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.75 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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