The pie charts show percentage of the population in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the expected proportion in 2050 by three age groups.
Overall, it is clear that the number of people who is 15-59 years old are expecting to increase dramatically in Yemen, while in the same age group there will be a significant drop in Italy within 50 years.
Looking into more details, about half of population in Yemen were children in 2000, at 50.1%. Besides, there were 46.3% in the group 15-59 years, making it the second highest among other age sections. However, the projection for 2050 shows the figure for 0-14 years has a significant growth from 46.3% to 57.3% and the proportion of 0-14 years accounts for only 37%.
In Italy, the figure for 15-59 years stood out at 61.6% in 2000, yet the proportion of it somehow decrease considerably by 15% within 20 years. Moreover, 24.1% of population were in the group 60+ years in 2000. In 50 years time, the percentage of it has a huge increase of 20%. At least, only 11.5% of population in 0-14 years can be witnessed on the projection for 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62886597938 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48695181356 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9640706279 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194512843192 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911962741234 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634931351218 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142167606728 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648365164667 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.