The charts below gives the information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future

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The charts below gives the information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.

The change in urban population growth in three different particular regions of the world from 1950 to 2030 is displayed in the bar chart, shown in percentage.
Overall, the population in urban area globally was more contributed by it in Latin America than Africa and Asia. Furthermore, staying at big cities will be more and more popular dramatically in the whole parts of the world, especially in the aforementioned regions.
Initially, global population settled in urban area accounted for almost a third, with the vast majority located in Latin America at two fifths. When it comes to two other continents, the rate of persons who populated Asia were as similar as that living in Africa in approximately one in ten. By 2000, all figures had witnessed a significant growth.
Eventually, the proportion of urban population in the entire world is predicted to grow significantly to be twofold of the beginning, and that in Latin American will increase to four fifths, breaking the record as the major contributor. Meanwhile, the rate of Asian is envisaged to be the second highest, inclining to almost a sixth. Moreover, that of African which will experience a dramatic incline to slightly more than a half.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96046871289 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5409334709 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185177347586 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696885235269 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586219787227 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116763103099 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458638278218 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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