The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia s trade in three nations in 2004 to 2009

Essay topics:

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia's trade in three nations in 2004 to 2009

The given chart indicates revenue that Australia earned from imports and exports to China, Japan and the United States in the course of 5 years, starting in 2004
Overall, while sales from Australia to China witnessed an upward trend, those to Japan and the US fluctuated. Australian purchases from China experienced a similar change to exports’, yet imports from the 2 others countries were stable during the period. Australian Dollars in transaction with China occupied the first spot among 3 partners regarding imports, but this position belonged to Japan when considering exports.
In 2004, China paid Australia roughly 10.5 million dollars for its exports. Then, Chinese consumers had a tendency to use more Aussie products, which boosted their sales up to about 38 million dollars 5 years later. The trend of Australian imports from China mirrored that of exports, which started at nearly 19 million dollars before rocketing and hitting the peak of 30 million dollars in 2009.
Whereas trade balance between Australia and China reversed from deficit to surplus in 2008, that with Japan and the US stayed in just one form. revenue Australia earned from exports to Japan stood at 21 million dollars in 2004 before fluctuating and coming back to the initial sales in 2009. In contrast, the figure for imports remained stable throughout the course at 20 million dollars. Data of Aussie imports from Japan was also that from the US and mostly doubled Australian exports turnover to the US from 2004 to 2009.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (2 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-09-20 Duong Thuy 61 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Revenue
...pan and the US stayed in just one form. revenue Australia earned from exports to Japan ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4596641988 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0008999919 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199503689441 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893046110905 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052151914415 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13154200364 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315696074064 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Revenue
...pan and the US stayed in just one form. revenue Australia earned from exports to Japan ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4596641988 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0008999919 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199503689441 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893046110905 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052151914415 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13154200364 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315696074064 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.