The bar chart depicts the information about the average of number calories that a human take daily in USA, Italy, UK, India, Democratic Republic of Congo nations and the proportion of the mature society that was overweight in the year 2013.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in the USA men were consumed the around 2400 calories and women near about 2000 calories. Italy and UK countries taken the same amount of calories. In India men were consumption the calories less amount of the other nations. Democratic Republic of Congo both males and females were less consumed near about 1500 calories.
The given charts further collates that in the USA largest percent of obese was 70. Italy population was overweight about 3 percent decreased from the USA. In the UK nation humans were overweight near about 60 percentile. Last but not least India was the lowest country in obese above of the 40 proportion. Whereas, Democratic Republic of Congo population overweight was 30 percentage.
Overall, USA nation masses taken the maximum amount of calories and minimum calories ate by the Democratic Republic of Congo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5578801002 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.716385712 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9090909091 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227182229996 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935663960629 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447059915287 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139827569337 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491529701617 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.