The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts depict the mean amount of calories gained by a person daily and the percentage of overweight adult population in 2013 in five different countries.
The recommended daily calorie limit for men is around 2400 calories, and that of the women is around 2100 calories. USA, Italy and UK over achieved the advised daily calorie intake, while Democratic Republic of Congo fell short of it by large. India failed to meet the recommended daily calorie consumption for men. The people of USA on average consumed the maximum calories in a day which was 3750 calories, in contrast to citizens of Democratic Republic of Congo who had the least at 1590 calories.
USA had the largest percentage of obese adult population which was around 70%, whereas Democratic Republic of Congo had 30% overweight people, being the least among the five countries. Italy, UK and India respectively had 68%, 65% and 43% of mature obese individuals.
So, to conclude, the people of USA had the maximum calories daily and a large percentage of them were obese while the citizens of Democratic Republic of Congo consumed the least calories along with the lowest percentage of obese adults.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your o 78
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games Discus 55
- The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. 78
- The charts below show the average number of calories that is amount of energy in food and drink that a person consumes daily in five countries and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries Summarize the 63
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0306122449 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64171435382 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8151256744 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286260960984 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1348863367 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126671066647 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217729941034 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128472396059 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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