the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The charts compare the consuming of 3 different type of nutrients in meal of american.
It is clear from the chart that in snack has the lowest proportion of sodium whereas and it contains the largest quantity of sugar.
Dinner has the largest percentage toxic from both sodium and saturated fat respectively 43% and 37%. However, the amount of sodium and saturated fat significant decrease in snack and breakfast. In snack has the same percentage 14% of sodium which also have in lunch around 30%. The proportion of saturated fat occupy 21% in snack and approximately 30% in lunch. In breakfast, the amount of toxic slightly decrease get 16% the lowest rate.
About sugar which is added most in snack get about 45% whereas, breakfast of american contains 16% sugar which is the lowest proportion. The percentage of sugar account for 23 % in dinner and around 20% in lunch
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95302013423 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63818119165 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8857865822 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720676612933 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348983246488 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356118900924 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574030807165 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358121645958 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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