The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of whicj may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients,all of whicj may be unhealthy if eaten too much

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about percentages of typical foods of three types of nutrients such as,Sodium,saturated fat and sugar which,may be unhealthy if eaten every day

Overall,in the dinner all of three nutrients experienced a high percentage however,in the breakfast three nutrients shows a least percentage than other times such as,Lunch, snacks and dinner.

In Lunch,sodium and saturated fat experienced similar percentage about,29 percent and 26 percent.In snacks,lots of people added sugar for their meals about,42 percent but,sodium showed least persontage about,14 percent people sometimes eat sodium in snacks. However, saturated fat percentage is higher than sodium for using in snacks

In dinner,least people added sugar for their meals than sodium and saturated fat. In addition,adding saturated fat and sugar showed similar percentages in breakfast like 16 percent.However, in Lunch, Sodium illustrates high er percentage than two nutrients.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82014388489 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07127686419 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 139.0 22.4926829268 618% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 809.0 112.824112599 717% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 139.0 22.9334400587 606% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.0 5.23603664747 898% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187940556097 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187940556097 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140202477482 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826430563021 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 75.5 13.2329268293 571% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -78.07 61.2550243902 -127% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 58.7 10.3012195122 570% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.66 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.62 8.06136585366 181% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 11.4329268293 534% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 57.6 10.9970731707 524% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 11.0658536585 551% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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