The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The three kinds of ingredients consumed in different meal times are depicted in pie charts, and it likely causes a health risk for excessive consumption of this.

Overall, people tend to consume more calories which is vulnerable to cause health problems at night. However, eating a small amount of food also contributes to the high concentration of such nutrients.

The majority of nutrients are eaten in dinner time, accounting with 43% for sodium and 37% for saturated fat. With the same time, Sugar consumption halves from sodium level, but mostly eaters of such nutrient occur in the snack time at almost a half. Compared to other calories, the higher consumption is only as much as 21% and 14% for fat and sodium.

There is almost a third of sodium consumption at the lunchtime while eating food which contains 26 of saturated fats in the daylight and only about one-fifth of sugar is consumed at that time. Surprisingly, the habits to consume fewer nutrients are shown in breakfast time with only 16% on average.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95375722543 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66772869137 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5653189759 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0598727767468 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285712784638 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191579121368 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408602043272 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169309831886 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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