The given pie charts illustrate the proportions of unhealthy nutrients in main meals in the USA.
Looking at the graphs, it can be immediately seen that while the order of four common meals are almost similar in the contribution of sodium and saturated fat, these proportions of added sugars are different. The highest percentages of sodium and saturated fat are consumed in dinner whereas snacks are responsible for the highest amount of added sugar.
Specifically, the pie charts reveal that although the dinner contributes the highest percentage of sodium and saturated fat to 43% and 37% respectively, this meal ranks second of added sugar with almost a quarter. Following that, the percentages of lunch in both 3 harmful nutrients are not significantly different with 29%, 26% and 19% respectively.
At the same time, snacks which are the major consumed meals in added sugar with 42%, just rank third in the involvement of 2 other harmful nutrients, including 14% of sodium and 21% of saturated fat. Breakfast, additionally, takes up the remaining approximately 15% in both 3 kinds of nutrients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21022727273 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00145776393 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6249126362 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112961981708 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609361072791 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535496828238 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871482918088 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574753264119 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.