The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of basic meals for 3 different basic substances which are unhealthy if consumed too much. Overall, sodium and saturated fat hold the major proportion of dinner while snacks’ main ingredient is sugar.
Having looked at the pie charts for more details, it is clear that, in terms of sodium consumption, dinner accounted for over 40 percent. Lunch’s figure takes up approximately a third. Notably, the percentages of sodium contained in breakfast and snacks are the same, consuming about 40 percent. When it comes to saturated fat eaten, it makes up 37 percent of dinner and 26 percent of lunch. The figures for breakfast and snacks are 21 and 16 percent respectively. In contrast, the proportion of Snacks accounts for the greatest amount of sugar, capturing over 40 percent which doubles the figure for saturated fat. Significantly, dinner contains a modest percentage of added sugar compared to saturated fat and sodium, representing 23 percent. Breakfast consists of 16 percent of added sugar which is equal to the percentage of saturated fat in the mentioned meal. Lunch’s figure is 19 percent.
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 73
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007 73
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams e g football However some people think that it is more beneficial to play individual sports e g tennis and swimming Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- These days mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 11
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...while snacks’ main ingredient is sugar. Having looked at the pie charts for more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20540540541 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91848845675 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2151513884 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849081474148 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381416737863 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449927281024 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919445098752 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392938339914 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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