The three pie charts compare the percentage of unhealthy ingredients consumed in four different type of meals in the USA. It can be clearly seen that dinner and snacks are more detrimental than others in this country.
According to the first chart, the peak belongs to dinner as in the second chart which obtains 43% and 37% of sodium and saturated fat respectively. In contrast, the figures for dinner in the third chart is fortunately much lower (23%). As is observed from three charts, breakfast is the most healthy meal, only contains 14% sodium as snack does and saturated fat and added sugar are noted identical (16%). One of the stable figures of meals belong to lunch which is comprised with 29% sodium, 26% fat and 19% sugar. As referred before, snack contains only 14% of sodium, however this figure is expanded for other nutrients. Snack contains approximately one fifth of saturated fat, while the percentage of added sugar intend to reach a half.
Overall, intelligence to cut down a consumption of undesirable nutrients is necessarily demanded as it is harmful for our health if we continuously consume it regularly.
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- For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73939658115 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.581268147 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126990753184 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563574252904 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523124737435 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812124631473 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631888837873 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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