The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The charts below illustrates the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
On the first graph it shows the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad in a 10 year period. There was an obvious upward trend except for year 1991. From year 1985 the recorded number of Japanese tourists was approximately 5 million, then rose up to 11 million in the year 1990. The upward trend was interrupted in the year 1991 which then decreased to merely 10.5 million. On the following year the number of Japanese tourists had a slight increase which resulted to almost 12 million, moreover the increasing trend continued up to 1995 reaching the peak with roughly 15 million recorded Japanese tourists travelling abroad.
The second chart shows the Australia's share of Japan's tourists market. In 1985, 2 % of the Japanese travellers went to Australia. It continued to increase to almost 5% in a span of 4 years. The percentage dropped to approximately 4% in 1989, however it managed to rise again a year after and the upward trend continued up to year 1993 with more than 6% then dropped to 6% in 1994.
In conclusion, number of Japanese tourists increased as the year passes by.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, then, except for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94312796209 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69261132535 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.3037764534 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338480468948 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172531872513 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169417418606 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284613951861 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180491056063 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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