The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts give information about the proportion of male and female employment in country A and country B in three sectors (industry, agriculture and services)
Overall, the proportion of services accounting for the highest percentage in two countries, while the proportion of industry in country A is the least popular and the proportion of agriculture is the least common in country B.
In country A, it is clear to see that services cover a large proportion in country A (56% of male workers and 49% of female workers). In agriculture, the rate of female workers was greater than the rate of male workers (43% and 29%, respectively). In addition, industry has the lowest number of workers in both sexes.
In country B, the figures for man workers and female workers in services are the most significant, at 65% and 88%, respectively. Conversely, male and female account for a small proportion in agriculture (3% compared to 1%). In addition, the industry sector in country B attracts more male employees than female ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...male workers 43% and 29%, respectively. In addition, industry has the lowest numbe...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...est number of workers in both sexes. In country B, the figures for man workers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95790276221 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470930232558 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.504952593 43.030603864 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.857142857 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297890238493 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145922330653 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648562115285 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204821616148 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560212262172 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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