The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The given charts provide information about the industrial, agricultural, and domestic water consumption in six countries of the world.

Overall, the highest percentage of water used for agricultural purposes in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia, whereas North America and Europe used the most water in the industrial sector.

To be more precise, North America and Europe have a similarity water consumption. In both of these countries, about half of the water used in the industrial sector, and almost one-third for agricultural use, while 13% and 15% of the water used for domestic purposes respectively.

On the other hand, around 80% of water consumption in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia used on cultivation. Besides, households, which comprised almost one-ten of water usage in Africa and Asia, whereas domestic used made up 19% of South America's water. In contrast, the industrial sector accounted for about 10% of South America, Africa, and South East Asia's water used, while in Central Asia, merely used up 5% of the water in industrial usage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74894326053 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482954545455 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9950163225 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260417344386 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142393352719 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719806204184 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191311265107 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042134216905 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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