The given pai charts provide details about that how much water was utilized for three different purposes namely industrial work,agriculture work, and domestic work in six areas of the world.
Overall, it is interesting to note that the maximum water was used in order to formland work, whereas the use of water was the least for domestic work.
It is a apparant from the chart that the percentage of water which used for industrial was 48% in North America. 39% water utilized for farming, while approximately 13% water was used for household. Moreover, in South America the use of water was increased, whilst industries used the least water. The percentage of water was almost similar in order to domestic work the maximum water was used for industries by the citizens of Europe.
Moving further, around 88% water was used for formlabd by Africa and Central Asia. while, the percentage of water which used for industrial work was 12 in South East Asia. in addition, the similar water was used for domestic work in Africa, Central Asia and South East area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , agriculture
...ifferent purposes namely industrial work,agriculture work, and domestic work in six areas o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...namely industrial work,agriculture work, and domestic work in six areas of the wo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting to note that the maximum water was used in order to formland work, whereas ...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s the least for domestic work. It is a apparant from the chart that the percen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., around 88% water was used for formlabd by Africa and Central Asia. while, the p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...r formlabd by Africa and Central Asia. while, the percentage of water which used for...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ustrial work was 12 in South East Asia. in addition, the similar water was used fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53228535829 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.528928648 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226182558928 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138158416273 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239823975255 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16253741074 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311565865749 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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