The pie chart illustrate percentage of water consumption in 6 areas all over the world which are North America,South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South east Asia.
As we can see in the chart, the usage of water is for three different sectors, industrial use,agricultural use and domestic use.
It is obvious in each chart that the usage of water in agriculture is the most.In addition domestic usage is the least.
However,proportion of industrial use is dramatically different in Europe than other areas which is 53% only for this sector. In the second place North America has the most usage and after that we see a huge drop in using water in industrial for South Africa.In comparison with America and Europe, Asia and Africa has the least consumption in industrial.
The charts show that domestic usage in Central Asia and South East Asia are equal which is 7%.There has been a slight difference in usage for Africa with 9%.
overall, Agriculture irrigation has the highest place in usage which with a long- term plan, countries will be able to control this massive use of water in this sector.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 56
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , South
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Suggestion: , agricultural
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Suggestion: In
...age of water in agriculture is the most.In addition domestic usage is the least. ...
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Suggestion: addition,
... of water in agriculture is the most.In addition domestic usage is the least. However,p...
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Suggestion: , proportion
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...ifference in usage for Africa with 9%. overall, Agriculture irrigation has the highest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, in addition, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81891931322 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.547539520022 94% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5768785269 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19015039279 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103897157034 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475331916813 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10962319888 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515127536182 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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