The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

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The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The pie charts elucidate the different contributing factors to make people happy between two age groups, those who are under 30 and over 30.
It is apparent that, people under 30 the physical appearances are important contributing factors to the happiness and travelling whereas over 30 years old people can feel happy by financial security and family factors. Meanwhile, achievement at work and hobbies remained at the highest contributing factors for the happiness for all age groups.
About a fifth of people under 30 years old chose the physical appearances are one of the contributing factors to make them happy, while 15% of people believe travelling is the one making them happy. A quarter of people have chosen the financial security make them happy and 14% of them chose as the family is the factors for the happiness.
In contrast, the main happiness factors are the achievement at work and doing hobbies for all age groups. The prominent factors for happiness of 31% for under 30 and 32% for over 30, while hobbies contributed about 22% for under 30 and 24% for over 30 years old people.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276699029126 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.121359223301 0.116061578633 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0873786407767 0.0759168565197 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0145631067961 0.0366838410393 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0242718446602 0.0131127313244 185% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165048543689 0.155750635184 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0388349514563 0.0379272487307 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65521888152 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0145631067961 0.0210936926555 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101941747573 0.0948980150116 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00485436893204 0.00437022459523 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00485436893204 0.00967000014798 50% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1104.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90374331551 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336898395722 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267379679144 0.247514529752 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16577540107 0.171178102325 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128342245989 0.112407865282 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65521888152 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44385026738 0.546246751206 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.2416552686 49.3433353143 73% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7142857143 23.0094962315 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.382195915 42.9750493124 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.714285714 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 23.0094962315 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 53.4522536287 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 2.94281807926 102% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324543904429 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.240203555349 0.181151798455 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.138511137074 0.0850326197045 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.803984045112 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13336588002 0.157042692854 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209813049957 0.228904883108 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104091308777 0.108899403657 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395111073067 0.367819155151 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050472253772 0.0812612215331 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240324753608 0.316326947829 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107243627931 0.0921553760075 116% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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