The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict a survey of which the results point out the prevalence of happiness source age-wise.
Overall, both groups of people have some sources of happiness in common and reported that they felt a sense of exuberance mostly when acquiring career achievements, which crosses the 30% mark. However, there are also some differences in terms of what can make people under 30 happy compared to that of those over 30.
As per the chart, beside the aforementioned most-prevalent reason for happiness, these groups also have doing-hobbies as another major happiness source with 22% and 24% for under-30 and over-30 age range, respectively. A good appearance and financial security are somewhat in the same range in terms of creating joy with both being somewhere in the vicinity of 20%.
Noticeably, traveling and being with family is surprisingly less of a common way to reduce stress and generate dopamine as each only accounts for 14% to 15% of the aggregate proportion. Last but not least, other factors create less happiness for people under and over 30 with only 10% and 14% for each group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: compares
... of what can make people under 30 happy compared to that of those over 30. As per the...
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Suggestion:
...being somewhere in the vicinity of 20%. Noticeably, traveling and being with fam...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...0 with only 10% and 14% for each group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04891304348 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7690684064 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3264723637 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16803097263 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825791270071 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602757138452 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110507080105 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565907692484 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.