The charts below figure the using of energy (oil, coal, gas, nuclear power and other renwable sources) in the UK and the USA in 2000 and 2006. Units are measured in percents.
Overall, the highest point on this chart in year 2000 belongs to USA (over 35%) at oil consumption. The highest point of energy consumption in 2006 belongs to the USA, too (40 %) at oil consumption. The lowest point in 2000 is at the ~5 %, it shows the consumption of other renewable sources in the USA. The lowest point in 2006 has practically the equal percentage with other renewable sources.
The most used source of energy in the UK in 2000 is coal, approximately 30%, it is slithly higher than the oil consumption in the same year. The lowest point of energy consumption in UK represent 5% of other renewable sources. The gaz's using is in the middle of the chart (~20%), it is slightly higher than nuclear power's using (~15 %).
Comparing the datas from 2000 and 2006, can be observed that the using of the gaz in the United States considerably increased in 2006 (from 2-% to 37%). The coal consumption, also changed, in 2000 it was 30%, in 2006 it decreased to 12%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51941747573 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53313021789 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.681524715 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443473966587 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166346987691 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111145874353 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264257813213 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076514889947 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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