The charts below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about terms of percentage of people’s frequency of eating at junk food restaurants in the USA which is in one decade from 2003 to 2013.
In overall, masses who ate at outside from home in once a week and once or twice a month constituted a major since people who took consumption of fast food in restaurants at everyday was least over the period.
It can be seen from the information that junk food restaurants were more popular among people who ate at outside from home during once a week which accounted at approximately a third and over a quarter in the given three years followed by masses who went into restaurants in once or twice in month in particular nation. In addition to this,people who chosen several times a week to ate in restaurants can be observed at less than a fifth in 2003 and increased slightly at a fifth during 2006. After this , it dropped and reached at over 15% between 2013 in specific region.
The charts further proves that consumption of junk food by people In a few times a years was found at 15% and upon one in ten respectively from 2013 to 2003 in USA . Furthermore, in the America the proportion of people who never ate at fast food restaurants remained relatively constant at nearly one in twenty (3%) during 2006 and 2013 where it noticed at 4% in 2003. Lastly, human who chooses ate at outside regularly attained a lowest figure and never rose at 5% in given ten-year periods in the USA.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, third, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 33.7804878049 198% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56981132075 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022128631 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498113207547 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0828321393 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.375 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198271883432 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111851521786 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472617481453 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145558109017 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374020240709 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.