The charts below shows information about honey - bee colonies and honey production in the US. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar chart depicts the number of honey- bee colonies in the United States between 1970 and 2010, while the second bar chart illustrates the amount of honey production in the United States during the same time period.
Overall, between 1980 and 2010, the number of honey - bee colonies and honey production in the United States decreased significantly. Furthermore, the number of US honey-bee colonies increased steadily from 1970 to 1980. By contrast, the amount of honey produced in the United States decreased significantly.
The number of honey-bee colonies increased dramatically from 4 million in 1970 to 4.3 million in 1980. However, by 1980, the figure had fallen to 3.5 million. Moreover, the number of colonies fell from 2.6 million in 1990 to 1.7 million in 2010.
The volume of honey production peaked at 130.000 tonnes in 1970 before rapidly declining to 110.000 tonnes in 1980. Furthermore, honey production increased significantly to 120.000 metric tons in 1990. However, there was a rapid decrease (of bee production, from 100.000 tonnes in 2000 to 70.000 tonnes in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... United States decreased significantly. The number of honey-bee colonies increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24293785311 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77505344107 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468926553672 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7556853449 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206559849349 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101323409722 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695600985241 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140559307776 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614368042905 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.