The bar chart below depicts income from five export commodities in two different years, 2015 and 2016. Furthermore, the table supports the bar chart by illustrating the proportion change of export earnings during 2 years. Overall, it is clear that Petroleum Products made the greatest impact to export earnings, in both 2015 and 2016, while Textiles contributed the least. And also, Gems and Jewellery was the only commodity category that was exported more in 2015 than in 2016.
Petroleum was the highest for both 2015 and 2016, with amount of 60 billion Dollars in 2015 and made a slight change (3%) to 63 billion Dollars in 2016. Following Petroleum was Engineered Goods that contributed approximately 53 billion Dollars in 2015, before made a 8.5% rise to around 61 billion Dollars. After that, export earnings were made by Gems and Jewellery goods, around 45 billion Dollars in 2015, before decreased 5.18% to about 40 billion Dollars in 2016.
In the fourth place was Agricultural Products, with a contribution of around 31 billion Dollars in 2015. In 2016, it then increased 0.81% to about 32 billion Dollars. The least contribution was made by Textiles, where it contributed around 28 billion Dollars in 2015, before made a 15.24% increase to approximately 35 billion Dollars in 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...53 billion Dollars in 2015, before made a 8.5% rise to around 61 billion Dollars....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08920187793 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71704057873 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5572644892 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240682307843 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126042345058 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613219074868 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187878516582 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101088635684 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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