Most parents grant children with all things they want and let them do what they want to do. In my view, giving what they want and letting them do things they want is harmful. This essay will discuss the harmful effects caused by this behavior in children's future life.
Firstly, if parents always grant children's wishes, their children will be pampered and selfish. This is because children feel that their parents will always fulfill their demands. When children have reached their adulthood, they will interact with other people. This behavior will not be accepted because in certain circumstances they will even be required to prioritize other people's needs. For example, when children are in their 20s, they may have to work with their colleagues and they need to give priority to their teams' needs first.. If those children act with that way, they will not be accepted in their workplace. Thus, they will not be successful in their careers.
Secondly, providing all children's wants will only make them unable to live autonomously. This is due to their relying on their parents, and think that their parents are able to provide everything. This leads to the loss of struggles and efforts. When children are growing up with these behaviors, of course they will not be able to live independently. For instance, parents get used to buy children all toys they want although they are expensive. As a consequence, children will think they can get anything they want without even doing their responsibilities such as studying and tidying up their beds.
In conclusion, granting children with everything they want is not a good habit since it will make children pampered and selfish; and they cannot live independently in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to being'.
Suggestion: accustomed to being
...future life. Firstly, if children is accustomed to be given everything they want, they will b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83532934132 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44799800903 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473053892216 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.141750011 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305383606016 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129512519575 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729746263205 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208296620544 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671847600899 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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