The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
The charts compare the percentage of two kinds of shows watched by male, female and four groups of age in Australia. Overall, most of the female watch reality shows, even though they watch slightly fewer game shows. Nevertheless, the people who watch the most television are in the age group of 45 and over.
Nearly 70% of female watch reality shows, while approx 35% of male tend to watch this shows. Moreover, regarding from the charts, the most people who watch reality shows is female. However, in terms of game shows, the number of men watching this shows is slightly higher, with just above 60%. On the other hand, nearly 70% of people aged 45 and over like to watch television. Which is clear that elder people have more spare time spending on those shows than youngsters.
As can be seen, the least people aged 25-34 watch game shows, with approx 40%. However, 60% of this age group watch reality shows. The percentage of people aged 16-24 who watch reality and game shows is the same, around 50%. Finally, just above 65% of the age group of 35-44 watch reality shows, compare with approximately 30% of this age group watching game shows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d 45 and over like to watch television. Which is clear that elder people have more sp...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'however', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.304166666667 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.1125 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0759168565197 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.0366838410393 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00416666666667 0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145833333333 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0379272487307 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.13965069293 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00833333333333 0.0210936926555 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0791666666667 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00416666666667 0.00437022459523 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.00967000014798 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1150.0 1161.00487805 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.9 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69306930693 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287128712871 0.337110787985 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.153465346535 0.247514529752 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0940594059406 0.171178102325 55% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.049504950495 0.112407865282 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.13965069293 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.1101177239 49.3433353143 85% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8333333333 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.846495842 42.9750493124 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.689975730869 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 32.1798679868 47.7609492067 67% => OK
Elegance: 2.6976744186 2.94281807926 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229797436106 0.418131533498 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113062587439 0.181151798455 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499933991715 0.0850326197045 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.592741647981 0.706616315825 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107250904295 0.157042692854 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121821236605 0.228904883108 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119899726285 0.108899403657 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.551453160995 0.367819155151 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0113399260956 0.0812612215331 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202177141518 0.316326947829 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102734897309 0.0921553760075 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 3.02926829268 297% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.