The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table indicates the results of the survey from 6800 Scottish adults who were interviewed in the past 12 months. Overall, dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting had the highest number of participants, while computer-based activities had the least number of joiners.
To begin, any performance which consists of dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting were mostly popular activities that people aged 16-44 taking part in, with 35% of people aged 16-24 and 22% of people aged 25-44. In contrast, undertaking any crafts was mostly enjoyed in the age group of 25-74, at 22%. There was also a major number of participants aged 16-24 took part in any virtual art activities, at 30%.
Regarding from the table, there was the least percentage of people aged 45-74 took part in any writing and computer-based activities, at 5%, and a similar percentage was for people aged 25-44 chose to do any writing activities. In terms of the age group of 16-24, only 10% took part in computer-based activities and 11% chose to undertake any crafts and purchase culture. It is clear that those activities had the lowest percentage of participants of this age group.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'as for', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276785714286 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.15625 0.116061578633 135% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102678571429 0.0759168565197 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0178571428571 0.0366838410393 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00446428571429 0.0131127313244 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138392857143 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0758928571429 0.0379272487307 200% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86959739739 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0133928571429 0.0210936926555 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.09375 0.0948980150116 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00892857142857 0.00967000014798 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1198.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.9 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17525773196 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371134020619 0.337110787985 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247422680412 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180412371134 0.171178102325 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128865979381 0.112407865282 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86959739739 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 45.096418231 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 24.25 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0298892465 42.9750493124 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 135.714022679 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 48.9922680412 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.75 2.94281807926 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44173409006 0.418131533498 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.212985877402 0.181151798455 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0652120597541 0.0850326197045 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667791961995 0.706616315825 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114122719257 0.157042692854 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238714357936 0.228904883108 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112501848037 0.108899403657 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388832933947 0.367819155151 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.152973597875 0.0812612215331 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349012850071 0.316326947829 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935869203581 0.0921553760075 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.