The charts show the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 taking part in cultural
activities and sports in Australia in 2003
The given bar charts illustrate the differences between the percentages of male and female students of 5-14 age group involving in activities in cultures and sports in Australia in 2003.
overall, it's clearly evident that the percentage of girls taking part in cultural activities is higher than that of boys, whereas the opposite was true for sports. It is also noticeable that the highest distinction could be seen in dancing.
Standing at 25%, the percentage of girls taking part in dancing was much higher than that of boys with under 2.5 percent. The figures for drama and singing were similar with 5 percent of girls and about 4 percent of boys taking part in.
Playing musical instrument was the only cultural activity which had the higher attendance of boys at exactly 15%, compared with 10% of girls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...res and sports in Australia in 2003. overall, its clearly evident that the percentag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99270072993 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52774049335 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4153921339 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0195787958659 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00993624632226 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222181222178 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0149043694834 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258151252 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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