The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie charts give information about the proportion of water consumed in six global regions, in order to make use of water for three main purposes.
Overall, while North America and Europe use the most water for Industrial purposes, a majority percentage is attributed to four remaining areas, namely South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
To begin, North America use their water mostly on industry, about nearly a half but still lower by 5% compared to the proportion for Europe. In contrast, the contribution of water used in agriculture in both continents are fairly similar ( at round 39% and 32% respectively) and for domestic purposes, they account for approximately less than a fifth.
It is evident that an identical tendency can be witnessed in the consumption for agriculture in the last four areas, occupy a majority of between 71% and four fifths. On the other hand, two other categories take up no more than one tenth, except almost one quarter in domestic use in South America and 12% in industrial use in South East Asia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90155440415 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67869083983 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8285618984 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247728277907 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110328590009 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697187106408 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133047951601 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744639450994 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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