The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in 6 areas of the world.

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The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in 6 areas of the world.

The charts summarize information about the proportion of different water using reasons in some developed and developing regions of the world.

Overall, developed areas mainly use water for industrial purpose, while agricultural use is the primary intention of using water in developing areas.

In industrialized regions, which includes North America and Europe, people use no less than 48% and 53% of water for industries, accounting for the largest part respectively. On the water hand, watering crops take up around 39% in North America and 32% in Europe out of the total amount of water used. For household purpose, only 13% of water is used in North America whereas the ratio is 15% in Europe.

A wholly different pattern occurs with developing areas, as they mostly use water for farming purpose instead of industrial, compared to North America and Europe. The percentage of water used is significant, which accounts for 71% in South America, 84% in Africa, 88% in Central Asia, and 81% in South East Asia. Industrial use is not favored as it only takes up 7% in Asia, 9% in Africa and 19% in South America. Finally, for domestic reason, 10% of the total water amount is used in South America, 7% in Africa, 5% in Central Asia, and 12% in South East Asia.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64244179651 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9340658095 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369327834013 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165226898748 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676707839205 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234826286047 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03006158125 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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