The charts show the population of some of the world's largest cities and the world population. Summarise the information given and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts illustrate the populace of megacities and the global population in millions and billions respectively. The first chart is for the year 1990 and 2030, while the second chart depicts the population of the world from the year 1980 to the year 2030 for village and city areas.
The bar chart displays that in the year 1990 Tokyo had around 16 million citizens, New York had around 14 million and Shanghai came in third at around 12 million. However, it is projected by the year 2030 Bombay and Jakarta will have inhabitants of around 26 million and around 19 million respectively.
In the line chart, it was observed that in the year 1980 around 2.9 billion were residing in rural areas which will grow to around 3.2 billion by the year 2030. On the other hand urban cities had the number of 1.5 billion in 1980 and is predicted to rise to around 5 billion by the year 2030.
In conclusion population in megacities will grow by 2030 while, there will be a rise in the population of urban residents by the year 2030.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...llion were residing in rural areas which will grow to around 3.2 billion by the y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, third, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56989247312 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41911587828 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.6137701234 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111959008225 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670201979579 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598421814667 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885307029163 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751158029111 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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